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shyingviolet ([info]shyingviolet) wrote in [info]ls_mod,
Re: Back by popular demand *aka - dragged in kicking and screaming*
Third person writing sample:

Today was not going well at all.

First her alarm clock didn't go off, leaving her to wonder if she'd forgotten to set it or if her roommate had shut it off and left her to sleep. Either way Hinata was left with 20 min to get ready and get off to anatomy class. Apparently she wasn't the only one running late, as most of the bathroom was occupied, eating up a good 10 min of her time. Then she couldn't find the one bio-chem text book that she needed for the class that started almost immediately after her first ended. Looking in the drawer they had stashed most of the snackey foods she found her roomate had also taken the last of the cereal bars and left the empty box behind. Now she was going to have to go hungry till 1pm when she would finally be able to break for lunch.

Groaning, she grabbed her bag and ran out the door still in her flannel pajama pants and bunny slippers. Going as fast as she could she managed to make it across campus, down the hallways and into... a completely empty class room. Breathless and confused she looked around the hallway, spotting someone leisurely making his way down the hall.

"Excuse me..." she gasped, waving for his attention. "What happened to the class that's supposed to be here?"

He looked at her for a moment like she was crazy, taking in her clothing and the frazzled look on her flushed face. "There's no class there today," he said, trying hard not to laugh at the poor girl. "It's Saturday."

Now it was Hinata's turn to stare, the color in her cheeks burning darker as she flushed now from embarrassment instead of exertion. "S-Saturday?" she stuttered, trying to determine if he was serious or just playing with her. She only wanted to die more as he responded by showing her the date on his cell phone. "T-thank you..." she muttered, turning in a daze to head back to her room, to humiliated to do anything but crawl back in bed and hope to god nothing else went wrong for her today.

Other Notes: Hinata is terribly shy and hopless when it comes to interactions. I know this might make it difficult at first for people to interact with her, but she will warm up after a bit. She's most comfortable around animals, kids, and people who aren't loud *lol*
Any Questions: What is the air-speed velocity of an unladen swallow?


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