a labor of love that didn't quite work out (derkins) wrote,
@ 2008-06-09 06:40:00

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lena can't be witty at 7 in the morning
so i need to keep up with these memes, man. I STILL HAVEN'T FINISHED THE OTHER ONE GAH.

What would you say are the trademarks of my writing? What themes or quirks or turns of phrase have you noticed? What is it that makes a story by me -- well, a story by me?

AND

Certain characters of mine have been dosed with a potion that makes them tell only the truth.. Ask them any question that you want, and he or she will answer truthfully!

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ow_mybrain
2008-06-09 06:13 am UTC (link)

I like how your prose still feels like it's being narrated by the character you're writing. It's not just plain old third-person narrative, you feel like the character is sort of describing what's going on. You take into account their emotions and anxieties and that's reflected in the way you portray the events that happen to them. Does that make sense? My brain doesn't work all that well lately.

Neil: What exactly is it about Dot that makes you keep coming back? Also, will you ever tell her what your name really is?

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derkins
2008-06-09 08:56 pm UTC (link)

It totally makes sense and thank you!

Neil: She's sassy. She challenges me where no other has thought to or succeeded in. She's not boring and actually keeps me on my toes and I can't even tell you how refreshing that is, especially here in Stars-Fucking-Hollow. Also-- have you seen her?

And no. If I had my way? And I usually do, she'll never find out. I like her sass, but that doesn't mean I have to fuel it, you know?

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