I like how your prose still feels like it's being narrated by the character you're writing. It's not just plain old third-person narrative, you feel like the character is sort of describing what's going on. You take into account their emotions and anxieties and that's reflected in the way you portray the events that happen to them. Does that make sense? My brain doesn't work all that well lately.
Neil: What exactly is it about Dot that makes you keep coming back? Also, will you ever tell her what your name really is?
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