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March 10th, 2010
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Fic: Tremors

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From:[info]beckyh2112.livejournal.com
Date:March 13th, 2010 12:12 am (UTC)
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Awwww, thank you, Pux! *snoogles*

Kouji is so cute in this. I like the little signs of his earthbending in his bare feet, the teeny tremor, and the way he keeps digging into the earth with his hands. I like that Liu picks up on those cues so quickly, and the detail of moving the gates in his model of the city made me glee. Clever, paranoid Dai Li.

Thank you again!
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From:[info]dark_puck
Date:March 14th, 2010 07:58 pm (UTC)
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*strokes and adores*

Kouji is just one of the cutest things ever. <3 I figured that these were signs he somewhat consistently puts off, but people tend to miss or just attribute to his youth. And the tremors, well, that's something a well-trained earthbender would catch. <3 So... basically Toph and the Dai Li. :D Liu didn't get to be a Dai Li captain by collecting bottle caps!

You're very welcome, my darling. ^___^
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