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February 22nd, 2010
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Fanfic: Reprimand

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From:[info]beckyh2112.livejournal.com
Date:March 3rd, 2010 11:24 pm (UTC)
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Oh my. Jae needed that metaphorical beating pretty badly, especially if he's ever going to grow up into an acceptable human being. Long Feng allows him too much misbehavior, really.

I really love how you upped your game in this story. There's some good, hard-hitting bits in here. ^_^
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From:[info]dark_puck
Date:March 3rd, 2010 11:52 pm (UTC)
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Long Feng allows him too much misbehavior, really.

Hyo is going to work on correcting this, I think. Jae is what, twenty-five? That's nearly ten years he's been a legal adult. It is high time he started acting like one.


Thank you for that! <3 I worked pretty hard on this, and it was fun.
From:[info]beckyh2112.livejournal.com
Date:March 5th, 2010 08:19 pm (UTC)
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Part of the problem is that Long Feng doesn't care what Jae does with the rest of his time as long as he's good at his job and doesn't disgrace the uniform. Jae's own father threw him out years ago, so there's a lot of rebelling against that, as well as some unhealthy influences from the sort of life where throwing out your son for being gay is a reasonable approach.

So, yeah, it's about bloody time for Jae to start being held to standards of reasonable adult behavior. There's just been no one who has bothered to do so before or any role-models.
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