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red_white ([info]red_white) wrote,
@ 2010-08-17 21:19:00


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Test Scene
It was night, and the game was dragging on.  Hank has one hand in the air and the other on a beer.  The only time he wasn't rooting for the Beavers was when he took a swig.  And so far, everything seemed fine...

Until some jackass started talking shit about Hank's Team.  His fist hit the counter with a thud and a crack.  "What did you say?"

"The Beavers suck, dude.  Get over it."

Now, Hank Hall wasn't the best person at controlling his anger--not by a long shot.  They argued, and Hank got madder.  And he couldn't control what happened next.  Fists flew, and Hank ended up starting a brawl in the bar.

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-17 11:36 pm UTC (link)
Don had been in the bathroom when the fight had started. When he got out and saw the fighting he let out a sigh before saying Hank under his breath.

He didn’t know why he let Hank talk him into going to bar with him but they always seemed to end this way.

He started trying to make his way towards Hank doing his best to avoid fighting. Hopefully he could help end the fighting.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-17 11:39 pm UTC (link)

He landed a punch square in the another guy's jaw. Hank didn't need to be Hawk to deal with these weaklings. "What about the Beavers now, huh?!" He spotted Don, but that wasn't enough to make him stop. He did keep glancing at his brother, however, to make sure nobody tried picking a fight with him.

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-17 11:45 pm UTC (link)
Don dodges a few blows as he made his way towards Hank. He wanted to make sure Hank didn’t get in over his head.

Once he got closer he asked Hank , “What happened Hank?” If he knew what happened then maybe there was something he could do to help stop all of the violence.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-17 11:47 pm UTC (link)

"This dude had the nerve to talk bad about the Beavers, Don!" He tossed a guy into a table.

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-17 11:53 pm UTC (link)
“Is it really worth the fighting,” Don asked as he used a judo move to counter a guy who threw a punch at him.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-17 11:55 pm UTC (link)

A dodge. "How else is the guy gonna know he's wrong?" Then a counter.

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-18 12:00 am UTC (link)
Don would try explaining all the other ways Hank could have handled it but he had done that over a thousand times before. “You could have at least taken it outside so other people in the bar wouldn’t have joined in and there would have been as much property damage,” he said dodging another blow.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-18 12:05 am UTC (link)

"Those other people coulda stayed out of the fight if they wanted to," he replied, throwing another blow.

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-18 12:09 am UTC (link)
“But they wouldn’t have started fighting if you had not starting fighting,” Don said back to him ducking under a punch.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-18 12:15 am UTC (link)

"Hey, I was fighting one guy until these punks joined in!" Hank threw the final punch, sending the last brawler down. There were still some people lookin' like they were itching to fight, but not after the brawl they just saw, and definitely not with Hank.

Hank turned his attention to the guy who REALLY started the whole mess. "Who's the better team?"

"T-the Beavers!"

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-18 12:19 am UTC (link)
Don just let out another sigh as the fight ended. “Hank why don’t we go outside for a bit.” The bartender didn’t look to happy with them and it would give Hank some time to cool off.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-18 12:20 am UTC (link)

"Yeah, alright." Hank didn't really want to miss anymore of the game, but he supposed Don had a good reason to go outside.

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-18 12:24 am UTC (link)
“Good thanks,” Don said glad Hank didn’t put up more of a fight. He started walking towards the door outside.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-18 12:26 am UTC (link)

It took him a few moments, but Hank eventually followed his brother outside of the bar. He crossed his arms and looked back at the entrance, wanting to go back in. Not like he cared, but it was probably best Hank didn't go back in that night.

"Well?"

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-18 12:31 am UTC (link)
“Just though it would be smart to left now before we got kicked out,” Don said, “The bartender did not look happy.” Don was also starting to think maybe they should not go back in there tonight. He was trying to think of the best way to ease into saying that.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-18 12:33 am UTC (link)

"Oh, come on! Bar fights happen All The Time! And the game is still on!"

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-18 12:36 am UTC (link)
“Not ones that wreck the bar like that,” Don said, “If you want we could listen to the game in the car till things have a chance to calm down in there.”

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[info]red_white
2010-08-18 12:40 am UTC (link)

Hank crossed his arms and gritted his teeth. "Not my fault that guy had a big mouth and was too weak to back up what he said. And listening to the game isn't like watching it, Don!"

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-18 12:53 am UTC (link)
“I know Hank,” Don said with a calm voice, “But I don’t think would be smart to head right back in there. If you want we can always go to another bar so you can watch the game right now.”

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[info]red_white
2010-08-18 01:01 am UTC (link)

Hank grumbled a bit before he replied. "Yeah, I guess. Let's go. I'm driving."

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[info]peacefuldove
2010-08-18 01:05 am UTC (link)
“Fine you can drive,” Don said. He still did considered it a victory that he talked him into going to another bar.

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[info]red_white
2010-08-18 01:18 am UTC (link)

And maybe Don did have victory this time. Or maybe Don should have tried to keep Hank out of a second bar, because it was just going to end up the same way.

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