Log In

Home
    - Create Journal
    - Update
    - Download

Scribbld
    - News
    - Paid Accounts
    - Invite
    - To-Do list
    - Contributors

Customize
    - Customize
    - Create Style
    - Edit Style

Find Users
    - Random!
    - By Region
    - By Interest
    - Search

Edit ...
    - User Info
    - Settings
    - Your Friends
    - Old Entries
    - Userpics
    - Password

Need Help?
    - Password?
    - FAQs
    - Support Area


Marcus Flint ([info]flinted) wrote in [info]occultus,
@ 2011-12-02 23:12:00


Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend!  Next Entry
Entry tags:char: dominic montague, char: fred weasley, char: george weasley, char: jonathon chambers, char: marcus flint, char: oliver wood, char: weasley twins

Who: Falmouth vs Puddlemere
What: Quidditch happenings
Where: Puddlmere Stadium/St. Mungo's
When: 3 December
Rating: Gen
Status: Complete


He could hear the bludger faintly over the sound of the crowd, but it seemed distant. Zigzagging just to be sure Marcus raced towards goal, passing off to Min and then racing forward to catch the pass on. It was a move they'd practiced a lot, utilizing all three Chasers in a spiraling v. It was one of the newer plays that had given them such an advantage in their previous matches; the ones he'd been Captain for anyway. He caught sight of his cousin in his peripheral vision and readied the the final pass, shifting his weight, he released the ball, lobbing it to Min just as something smashed into his side.

The pain was instant and intense enough for his vision to grey alarmingly. He tried to hang on, to keep his balance but the force of the blow already had him half off the broom and he was holding on with one arm. Two things registered in his brain. One, Dominic had a clear shot on goal and would definitely score. Two, he couldn't really breathe properly. Why couldn't he breathe? Something had snapped when the bludger had hit, he'd felt it go, a rib or two most probably. He tried to gasp down as much air as he could, whilst at the same time struggling to right himself on the broom.

He knew he was slipping and if he fell; he glanced down, well there would be a mess. Gritting his teeth, he tried one last time to haul himself back upright onto the broom, raising his right arm (the one on the injured side) to catch hold of the broom. It was too much, a searing pain burned through his chest and he blacked out completely, brain deciding that it didn't want to register anymore of that agony.



(Read comments) - (Post a new comment)


[info]gredilicious
2011-12-04 06:21 pm UTC (link)
George nodded at Fred's promise, leaning his head forward against his Twin's with a tiny soft headbutt. It was moments like this George was so thankful he was a Twin. He didn't have to say anything and Fred just knew what sort of comfort he needed.

His eyes followed Fred's path to the desk but remain where he was, shuffling his feet a little. He listen to Fred quietly, a little frown marring his features which asked what was his brother playing at. George's mind was too much of a jumble to work it out.

"See Oliver." He parroted again, the pieces slowly clicking into place. His eyes met his Twin's with small glance, using their weird silent way of communicating to say thanks.

(Reply to this)(Parent)


(Read comments) -



scribbld is part of the horse.13 network
Design by Jimmy B.
Logo created by hitsuzen.
Scribbld System Status